KEEP: The entire idea of the project, keep looking to show my grandma's memory on to the final presentation. The idea of the altar and the heart also around this same situation by keeping it, and make sure the meaning behind it is very profound
MODIFY: Try too do something about the idea of the videos and the images as is very difficult, try to instead choose only one of this. Instead of the idea of typical frases of my grandma instead try to use images or just print the text into an aesthetic form in order for the work to be simpler and much more understandable.
ELIMINATE: Avoid the use the text. It can be distracting knowing i have already selected video of your grandmother
ADDITIOAL COMMENTS: Try to avoid the use of sharpie in any part of the project, make sure it represents Mexican culture in some form, as a theme to die de los muertos. Also try to look at Christian Boltansky’s work, as another form of reference in order for the work to functional in a better form.
CONCLUSION: It's seems to me as a very good work I have all the necessary elements for this work to function, should try to take into account the teachers recommendations in order to have a better grade, and a better work.